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King of the Losers


Major Franklin Clay had a reputation for taking insubordinate misfits and turning them into productive members of the military.  He also had a reputation for recognizing flashes of brilliance that other officers overlooked.  The two were certainly related; the simple fact was that a lot of bright, talented kids didn’t deal well with military discipline.  They got angry, they got rebellious, they got stir-crazy.  But if they could be whipped into shape, they made good Special Forces, and good Special Forces made great Company assets.  Hell, a quarter of the recruits he’d plucked from the dirt had turned Delta.

In short, Clay had a reputation for turning would-be wash-outs into some of the finest intelligence operatives in the world.

The other officers at Bragg called him all kinds of half-awed, half-mocking things (behind his back, of course).  Grunt-Whisperer.  Spook-Sitter.  King of the Losers.

So he was used to being stealthily approached by haggard drill sergeants.  Nobody liked admitting he couldn’t handle some punk kid, but these men were Swick and Special Forces, and had long since learned to show their problem-children to Clay before resorting to more aggressive tactics.  It was better that way, both for the kids and for the Army.  Why waste a potential resource, after all?

But the recruit standing just outside the window didn’t look like a typical troublemaker.  Hispanic, just under six feet tall, whip-thin even though he had to have been through the BCT portion of OSUT by now.  He was tidy and ordered, and standing at firm, unwavering attention—almost more like a Marine Corps recruit than an Army one.

The kid’s name was Alvarez, but everyone called him Cougar.  The sergeant failed to elaborate, and Clay didn’t ask him to.

“For once, Sergeant, I’m not sure I see the problem,” Clay said.

“Permission to speak candidly, sir?”

“Please do.”

The drill sergeant fidgeted slightly with his cover and glanced toward the recruit.  “I’ve never seen anything like him, Major.  Never says a word, follows orders to the letter, exceeds all physical requirements…works with anybody and everybody, pulling twice his weight in unit exercises—literally, on at least one occasion.  At first, I thought they were nuts making a young kid like that an X-Ray, but by the end of last week, I saw that I got nothing left to teach him.  Now, normally I’d grin and bear it, use him for a good example…”

Clay shook his head.  “He’s too young.”

“Yes, sir.  Seeing a kid his age doing so well in the program is hell on unit morale, especially when none of ‘em have prior service.  You see my problem, sir.  Can’t do a damn thing with him, but, by God, he can shot the wings off a gnat from a moving vehicle.”

Clay eyed the skinny kid standing out in the hot sun.  “How old is he?”

“Couple months shy of nineteen, but the special orders were all in proper order, sir.”

“If he shoots like you say, it’s no wonder they want him X-Rayed in,” Clay noted.  “The Company can get a lot of working years out of Special Forces if they shove ‘em in the program as soon as humanly possible.”  He sighed.  After a while, he nodded.  “Give him to me, I’ll take care of it.”

The sergeant let out the breath he’d been holding and pulled a folded piece of paper out of a jacket pocket.  “Hoped you’d say that, Major.  All it needs is your signature.”

Clay grinned wryly at the transfer orders and signed them.  “Go ahead and send him in.”

The drill sergeant gratefully saluted and left.  A moment later, Clay spied him outside the window, informing the recruit of his reassignment.  A moment more, and the kid was waiting outside Clay’s open door.

“You may enter,” Clay said.  He watched attentively while his latest foundling walked with swift, exact strides to stand at attention directly in front of Clay’s desk and salute.  “Good afternoon,” he acknowledged, and waited for the salute to drop.  “What’s your name, recruit?”

The kid said nothing.

“Don’t you like me, recruit?” Clay asked, keeping his tone light.  “I asked for your name.”

Dark, clever eyes flicked down toward the nametag on the kid’s duffel.

Clay smiled.  “Good.  That’s right, it sounds like a bullshit order, since I can read just fine for myself.  Assuming that’s your gear, of course.  And your drill sergeant wouldn’t have handed you over without telling me your name.  But I wanna know what to call you besides ‘kid,’ ‘recruit,’ and ‘pain in the ass.’”

And he wanted to know how the kid would answer the question.  There was a lot of information to be gained from the way a person introduced himself.

“Cougar,” the kid answered.  Belatedly, he tacked on, “Sir.”

“Well, Cougar, you’re my responsibility now.  Can you really shoot the wings off a gnat from a moving vehicle?”

Cougar shook his head.

Leaning back in his chair, Clay just kept smiling.  “Wanna learn how?”

Sudden hunger lit up the kid’s face, and he nodded eagerly.

Clay knew he’d catch hell for it; knew that Roque and the rest of the unit would bitch unceasingly; knew that no matter how many favors the man owed him, Axe was not going to be happy to be saddled with an Army kid who thought he had what it took to survive SEAL sniper school.

He also knew that it was all going to be worth it, if this kid who was too talented and determined for OSUT could squeeze in some special training before he rejoined his peers for the Q-Course.


.End.
OMG genfic. a little prequel on gaining Loser #3.

warnings: welcome back to my bastardized incomprehensible com-movie-verse. rampant military terminology (is that a warning?). language: pg-13 (primetime tv plus one use of bulls***).

timeline: several years pre-movie/pre-comic.

disclaimer: the Losers belong to DC/Vertigo.

notes: 1) so. glad i ran this by my intern for beta-reading, because i often forget how big a military geek i am. glossary of military terms after the notes. 2) the CIA does, in fact, recruit a hefty percentage of its field operatives from Special Forces units, notably Army Rangers and SEAL. 3) Bragg = Fort Bragg, headquarters for Army Airborne and Army Special Forces. 4) usually, you have to be 20 to apply to join Army Special Forces. however, a special order from a guy at the right level can get around age requirements pretty easily, provided the subject isn't a minor.

wash-out = someone who fails a training course.
the Company = the CIA. if military personnel say something's "Company-funded" or "Company-backed," they usually mean that the CIA is paying for whatever-it-is.
Delta = Delta Force, the top badasses of Army Special Forces. super-hush-hush, usually dressed to blend in with civilians. they could tell you that they eat bad guys for breakfast, lunch, and dinner...but then they'd have to kill you. seriously, these guys are like something out of a Tom Clancy novel.
Swick = Special Warfare Center (and School), the training and research center for psychological warfare. also based at Fort Bragg.
BCT = Basic Combat Training, part of Army Basic Training.
AIT = Advanced Individual Training, the part of Army Basic Training that is oriented to an individual's specialization (communications, medical, engineering, etc.)
OSUT = One Station Unit Training, a mash-up of BCT and AIT designed for X-Rays (Special Forces candidates with no prior military service).
cover = military hat. should be removed indoors and held at the side.
SEAL = Sea, Air, and Land; the Navy's primary special operations force. their qualification and training process is notoriously rigorous and yields the Swiss Army Knife of special forces operatives. they have a reputation for being some of the best snipers in the world (seriously; sniping from a boat? not easy!).
Q-Course = the Army Special Forces Qualification Course, consisting of four phases of training and assessment. it takes about a year, unless you're going into Medical (which takes another 32 weeks).

minor edit:
had it pointed out to me that Army and Marine Corps should be capitalized in this context: if i'd meant "army" in a generic sense, it could've gone uncapitalized, but since i was specifically referring to the United States Army (and United States Marine Corps), they need capitalization. was also reminded that an Army drill instructor is always a "drill sergeant." however, the response to the question "aren't you only supposed to salute outdoors?" is "it's usually best to err on the side of courtesy, except in the case of the Marines, who only salute when covered (wearing a hat)." an Army recruit, when entering the office of a major, would probably not get in trouble for saluting.

:pointl: Salute :bulletblack: Asset :pointr:
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Young!Cougar FTW!!!!